How does this Prologue sound?

it starts off with her having nightmares of her family being killed. she wakes up in an orphanage were the kids steal her blankets and they dont care about her and they make it impossible for her to escape. she was adopted into a new family. she sometimes missed her orphange because it was her past life. she snuck out to go vist them but imediately began to realize it wasnt worth the heartache those people didnt care about her anyway. the punishment for sneaking out is what keeps her from going back. the risk is to much and its harsh. she doesnt want to BE SENT BACK TO THE ORPHANGE AHHHHHH!!!! no way no can do cant sneak out again its a trap your new family will kick you out! yikes.. stay in your pjs and watch tv.. holly molly!!! if you sneak back out to the orphange your screwed you might as well just move back in.