How is this paragraph to my story i wrote?(:?

i absolutely, positively, LOVE it!!!!!!!! i would LOVE to read the whole book!! it would be awesome!! i'd probably read it over and over and over and over and over and over and over and etc.!!!!! so PLEASE keep going and try your best to get it published! as many books as i read i WILL come across it and this definitly will be my favorite paragragh. it's so great!